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お題:Should brain-implant digital devices for humans be regulated?
Agree=脳内デバイス規制賛成派の意見の回答例
回答例:CEFR B2レベル(比較的やさしめ)
Although the idea of using brain implants to improve health and cognitive abilities is intriguing, it’s important to acknowledge significant risks and ethical issues.
Firstly, there’s a worry about privacy due to the invasive nature of brain implants. The gathering and use of personal neural data may lead to increased surveillance, which can threaten people’s independence and confidentiality. Unauthorized access or manipulation of implanted devices also poses potential risks to the security of sensitive neural information.
Furthermore, the long-term effects of brain implants on health are uncertain. The surgical procedures involved in implantation may result in complications such as infections or unintended neurological consequences. The permanence of these devices raises ethical questions about individuals’ ability to agree to a lifelong change in their cognitive functions.
Additionally, there’s a concern about socio-economic impacts. The availability of advanced neurotechnology might create disparities, favoring those with more resources. This potential “neural divide” raises worries about a future where only privileged individuals have access to cognitive enhancements, widening existing social gaps.
In conclusion, while the idea of brain implants is interesting, it’s crucial to consider the associated risks, including privacy concerns, health issues, and potential societal inequalities. A careful and transparent examination of the ethical and societal implications is necessary before widely adopting these technologies.
いやいや!前編の規制反対派のB2レベルに比べると、語彙も論点もなかなか鋭いのでは!”neural divide“なんかパワーワードですよね!ちなみにこの「持てる者が技術のメリットを享受することでさらに格差が広がる」論点は、もう一つのホットなトピック、遺伝子操作(gene-editing)がお題であっても使える視点ですね!
回答例:CEFR C1レベル(難しめ)
さて、次はちょっとレベルを上げたC1レベル版のChatGPT先輩の回答例、見てみましょう。
While the allure of using brain implants for health improvement and cognitive enhancement is captivating, a comprehensive examination unveils substantial risks and ethical quandaries that demand serious consideration.
Firstly, the invasive nature of brain implants raises profound privacy concerns. The acquisition and utilization of personal neural data hold the potential for heightened surveillance, posing a direct threat to individual autonomy and confidentiality. Unauthorized access or manipulation of implanted devices further accentuates the vulnerability of sensitive neural information, necessitating robust security measures.
Additionally, the long-term health ramifications of brain implants remain shrouded in uncertainty. Invasive surgical procedures for implantation introduce the possibility of complications such as infections or unintended neurological consequences. The permanence of these devices adds a layer of ethical complexity, prompting reflection on individuals’ capacity to provide informed consent for a lifelong alteration in their cognitive functions.
Furthermore, the socioeconomic implications loom large. The availability of advanced neurotechnology may inadvertently exacerbate existing disparities, creating a “neural divide.” This potential scenario raises ethical concerns about unequal access to cognitive enhancements, intensifying societal divisions.
In conclusion, despite the enticement of brain implants, it is imperative to meticulously assess the associated risks, encompassing privacy issues, health concerns, and potential societal inequalities. A judicious and transparent exploration of the ethical and societal implications is essential before embracing these technologies on a widespread scale.
いやぁ、さすがC1レベルの先輩!(だから誰w)。B2版もなかなかでしたがさらに迫力が増しますね。英検1級の語彙もバンバン出てきて、ちょっとニヤニヤしちゃいます(変態?)。
最初は「英借文」でも大丈夫!練習で自分のものにしていきましょう!
ん?「こんなの書ける気がしない?」。もちろん最初は誰でもそうだと思います。でも「英作文は英『借』文」ともいわれるように、いろんな例を見て読んで、文全体丸覚えでなく噛み砕いて自分のものにして自分でも書けるようにしていく、その作業自体が「身に着ける」という過程だと思います。
ということで、「賛成」「反対」各2パターンずつ回答例を見てきました。それもこれもChatGPT登場のお陰です。本当~~~~~に便利な時代になりましたね!これ、英語学習に対して「Podcast普及」くらいのインパクトがあるのじゃないかな、と思います。Podcastはヒアリング学習に革命をもたらしましたが、ChatGPTは「英作文」に革命をもたらすのでは。
でもだからって放っておいて日本人全体の英語力があがるわけではありませんね。そうです、アンテナを立てて情報収集して、自分でやってみた人だけが、力をつけるのです。
ぜひ皆さんも、どんどん取り入れていきましょう!